If I could have one superpower, it would be invincible. If I could be invincible I would make a hole through the earth. Common people can't go there because people would be died by high temperature and high pressure. But I'm not gonna be a die because I'm a super hero. After that I would travel up to the space. I'll never come back <-------------------- ha ha ha ha ha ! Well, that crazy superhero would be die because of old. Human always die when the times come even the superhero. That superhero would be write a new world history like this........................
In 2008 August 5th <-------- Korean date
There was a brave superhero which name is Ju-won Park. People called him the crazy superhero because he did impossible and crazy things. Most of all, He made a hole through the earth at the first time in the world. After that he flew away to the space and he never came back until today.
Many scientist include Joseph, Jan-go and Cara( <------------ famous scientist) had researched for 10 years why Ju-won went to the space and never came back.
And the result is..............................................
"He is a invincible. this time he still fly away and never come back because he lost in the large space. Now, he needs help! ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not funny???
Okay, I'll write more funny stroy next week.
There are many worng words or sentenses on this writing.
I wrote this thing as soon as possible because of final exam <------------------- ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please keep your finger crossed.
1 comment:
Well, Ju Won, it's nice to hear different ideas. Rather than the tired old story of a superhero who saves the world, we have a superhero who flies into space for no reason whatsoever, and then gets lost out there in space. Sounds like the beginning of a good comic book to me. Very original and slightly humorous.
You're right, there are some spelling and grammar errors, but don't worry so much about that.
You did what I asked: you wrote the story in the first person (I/me/my) in the beginning of the story. Good job.
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