First of all, my school ideal must be free because this country is democracy. Democracy means 'People are owner of nation.' that means free. So school would be study 10 mins and rest 50 mins. At recession, students can play cards, listen music and played computer game with laptop.
Even students can go outside such as their house, PC room, movie, restaurant and have some beer.
At lunch time, Student can order anything like Korean food, Japanese food, Chinese food, American food <---------(very delicious *^o^*) .The lunch time would be continue for 2 hours.
After lunch, student have free time again for 40 mins. Then going back to study for 5 mins !!!
After 5 mins later go home. During school class you can go home anytime as you want.
But,You should study hard at home. That's your job.
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He he. Wouldn't that be nice? Freedom. You can choose when to go to school, when to study, and when to play.
I really like the part about American food at the cafeteria. Good idea. But, not too much, or you'll get fat!
Democracy is a good thing, except, when the people make bad choices. What happens if someone chooses not to study at home? What happens to him? (Not that YOU wouldn't study, but someone ELSE! Of course, you would always choose to study.)
Ha ha. Very interesting post. I hear you! You want more freedom.
My suggestion for this week is:
First: watch out for verb tense agreement. For example, in this sentence...
At recess, students can play cards, listen (to) music and playED computer game(s) with laptop.
The second "play" needs to be changed to the present tense (play computer games).
Also, please change "be continue" to "continue" and "going back" to "go back".
If you change those verb tenses, then all the verbs will be in the present simple tense.
Not bad. I will wait to read the other ones, before I decide who is the winner for this week!
Cara
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